Peer Critique

Your Name

Fatimeh

Other Student's Name

Brendan

Other Student's Site Name

DnD Character Creator

The three (3) strongest aspects about the other student's website with a paragraph each explaining why.

Strong Aspects to Brendan's Website are:

• He is passionate about Dnd. This is something that will help a lot in making his website as he will not run out of content to put into the website. He is also able to work on this website after this class if he wanted to because it is something he does in his free time.
• Another strong aspect is that this is something that would be very useful in the Dnd community. Most of the work that the website is intended to do is usually done on paper. There aren't a lot of websites that do what Brendan's website intends to do.
• There are always gonna be things to add to this website. There is a lot that could be done, added, and personalized to users as they use mor of it.

The three (3) aspects about the other student's website that need the most improvement with a paragraph each explaining why.

Aspects to be Improved About Brendan's Website are:

• The scope of the website is really big. Yes it is good there is a lot he could possibly do but he does need to hone in and not bite off more than he can chew for the website. He can always continue the site in the future if he wishes to. Decide on exactly what you want to complete to turn in this time around. What can you do that will be done correctly.
• Brendan's idea of the website is to allow people to log in and see past characters. This would require some type of data storage where users can log in and see saved info. This is not something I beleive we have learned in class and would need to do his own research and learn on his own.
• Decide on a theme or color pallete for the page. Dnd is a large scope to be generalized to one theme so it will be hard to decide as there aren't really rules to what it can be about.